I love the puns, I love the story, I love the poking fun at cliches! Although, I kind of wish the other characters had voices, especially now that you've introduced Blanche. That's not criticism, that's just a suggestion. This episode is great as it is. I love your work ^^
Yeah, I've definitely considered other voices for future episodes. Though I feel like it's been this way for so long that if other people suddenly start talking, it will have to be acknowledged by the plot somehow... Maybe he battles a mind reader and starts hearing someone else's inner monologue?
Ah .... that animation is so beautiful! But the story is a bit cliche and the characters, especially Katie, are very stereotypical. I find it very unrealistic that she would be so offended by Brian photoshopping her face as a joke, especially after she took a picture of Brian while he was sleeping. Unless you intended for her to be an overly emotional hypocrite. But I still can't get over how smooth the animation is. It's so pretty :)
Sorry, but this was a bit boring. The characters felt underdeveloped and the story was a bit predictable.
This series is one of the first things I've seen that combines comedy and plot twists in such a brilliantly hilarious yet extremely unpredictable way. You are a genius! :D
After reading the description I can honestly say that I have no problem with the fact this animation has "no music." Although it did bug me that the credit's music was bloody loud. A little sound editing would fixed that just fine. The sense of humour was rather ... odd. It wasn't my cup of tea ... or coffee. I don't get why the main guy paid the plumbers when they didn't fix the sink. And I don't think that this should be rated E.
The reason he gave them money is because he's a retard!
And I think you're right about the E thing. I will change it.
I'm still new to animating so I'm improving.
So ... much ... detail .... Very nice!!
Dahhhh so cute :3
Hilarious!! But I feel like it ended so suddenly. That's not necessarily a bad thing. If anything, it just proves how much I like it and wanted it to continue. Were the backgrounds and characters done by different people? It kind of seems like they were. They look brilliant!
SO MANY PUNS!! IT'S DELICIOUS!! Well done! :D
I have not laughed that much in a long time! All the plot twists and the spam ... Brilliant!! :D
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